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This game has great potential. I thought it was going to be heavy like all the other sandbox but this one surprised me and is entertaining. 

And a question, what is the pattern to follow for Mika's missions, in case she allows me to interact 2 times in a row in a day (when you train to have strength) and there are days that even if you train you do not interact with her (the days are Sunday and Monday). 

And what you buy at Mika's store is still not available?

very good game just missing the background music in the scenes

very good game has potential. 

At the beginning, after the MC gets out of bed, most of the scenes are like static (I mean that the people do not do something or do not change their position, they remain the same until the conversation ends and the same with the black screens, they remain the same. a long time). 

Another point is that the scenes with the girls (sex, etc.) should at least have an animation or a video if applicable, that part is also fine, I don't know if you want to change it or better in the future...

It's a very good game, at first it's a little heavy but then it's more bearable. I wasn't expecting those little winks or references to the anime "The Eminence in Shadow". 

The option to change the color of the text does not work, it always remains blank, even if I change it to the others and the option is checked in the preferences menu

The game has very good potential.

 My comments would be that you focus on adding music during the game scenes, I feel it strange without music, but when there is music I feel that atmosphere as if we were in that moment. 

The other comment would be the transactions between the renders, images, game scenes or whatever they are called, they are not smoothed (the sudden transition from one image to another in less than 1 second) (I don't know how much the value would be for that whether the transition is abrupt or not)

I love the game, the animations and the music are very good. I just can't adapt to the scene cuts

It's constructive criticism, I'm not a hater.

 The character designs and the story itself are very good. The bad thing is that I didn't like that the text was expressed exactly as the novel is boring to read in my case (one of them is the protagonist's thoughts, which are very long and are very descriptive).

 I know that most of the people who liked the game like to read... but I mainly came because these character designs caught my attention.

One question, have you thought about putting the game in multiples languages? I have tried it in itself and the game is very good with good animations

ahhh regarding the translation.

 There is a group that does the translations into Spanish on their own, here is the link of the page where they uploaded the game with the translation.

Here is the page link : 

https://acortar.link/tcj2Az

I play using android, I always download from there. then when trying the port that they did, the options system did not appear... I asked about the problem and they told me that it was not optimized or adapted for android... so I don't know if that problem can be fixed so that it can be seen on android apart you can talk to them contact them either from their discord; to make an official translation (but I do not promise that they will help you with the official translation, but it is worth asking) 

And there is a problem when using joiplay the bullets do not appear (when the scene lights up in a color that means something)

I have a question, will you pass it to other languages such as Spanish? 

It is that the game is very good 

Zimon

There is a problem with the languages, especially Spanish in the current version (from 0.75 onwards)

all the dialogues with Estia (from the beginning) are in English in the Spanish language

the spanish translations when you first interact with Estia (in the park) are in english